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展开查看  International travel often leads people to have some prejudices rather than broad-minded. What are the main reasons for this phenomenon? What do you think people can do to get a better understanding of the countries they visit?

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International tourism has become the biggest industry in the world. Some people think it cause tension between people from different culture. Others thing it leads to understanding between countries. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 

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Recently, international tourism has become the biggest industry in the world. In this situation, some people maintain that tension will be caused between different culture. While others believe that it leads to understanding between countries. As to me, I prefer the second opinion.

Admittedly, frequent international interactions, such as tourism, cause fraction between different countries and cultures occasionally. Facing the disaster happened in international tourism, different solution is selected by different country and causes all kinds of social influence (e.g. MH370 incident). What’s more, it is normal that the chosen solution for the accident can’t satisfying all the countries.

International tourism does generate some problems, however, it contributes increasingly to the understanding between countries. First, opportunities are given to the travelers to find how foreign people enjoying their life. Furthermore, friendship generated based on the communication. As everybody know, head of one country always arrange some meeting or conference with the president of other countries. This means the same.

Second, international tourism can boost the economy in attractions and create more job opportunities which contribute to more the stability and harmony of local society. People in tourism attractions may treat traditional culture as a commodity for sale, for instance, which both solve the local residents unemployment and leave tourist precious memory.

Taking all those factors into consideration, I would argue that the merit of international tourism outweigh its demerit. It is too arbitrary to regard it as the source of tension on the contrary it is the interaction opportunities between locals and tourists.
作者 樊荣
Sun Jul 20 12:42:53 UTC 2014
题目: International tourism has become the biggest industry in the world. Some people think it cause tension between people from different culture. Others thing it leads to understanding between countries. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 
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