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Subject: Some people think students should study together while others think they should be taught alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In contemporary society, education is playing an increasingly significant role in our lives. However, the public is recently having a hard time reaching consensus on whether students should study as a group or not. This essay will explore two main arguments often heard in this controversy.

It is understandable for some individuals to assert that studying together can be a highly effective and efficient way to acquire knowledge and skills. To start with, interaction with other students can make study efficiently. This is mainly due to the fact that people can ask others to discuss the problems they have, and with their assistant, the process of learning may then become delightful and more efficient. Moreover, studying in a unit enables students to exchange different opinions with others. Specifically, as most people come from different back grounds and have various life experience so that make people think differently; therefore, students can enrich their academic and professional experience. Additionally, studying as a team can foster the environment of cooperation--that is to say, students are benefit from learning with others. This is because it is the right time for people to making use of other people's advantage to make up one's shortcomings.

Admittedly, many individuals may claim that studying alone can be well-advised. The main reason for this is that learning by oneself can help students concentrate on subjects more. Apparently, the chance of getting disturbed from outsides is definitely shrunk . Despite this, studying alone also means you object the opportunities to communicate with other students. As a consequence, you do not know how other people's progress and give up on learning from others.

In summery, having considered all factors involved above, my own view is studying together is much better. Also, it would be wise for us to advocate learning with others.
作者 张浩然
Thu Nov 24 11:02:37 UTC 2011
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